I like the overall animation, especially your take on anime-look. Its quite good!
Although, for the first few seconds featuring the guy while he was just looking up to the sky.. his neck was kind of too long.. I think.
Anyhow, I especially like the facial expressions of the girl and the cupid when the girl was impaled, lol.
I kind of felt the hit there xD.
I also like the background and artwork, this is totally my favorite >w<
Overall, since I like anime, and I'd say you did a good job animating this, keep it up~ C:
P.S. Poor girl though.